CreditFAQsContact usUpdate logAccount Frozen
Fairyabc discussion Board
 Forgot password?
 Sign me up
Search
Read: 1906|Reply: 2

Corn Is Complicated

[Copy url]

1

Threads

10

Posts

195

Credits

Certified Pixie

Credits
195
Post time 2018-4-3 15:38:49 | All posts |Dock
For my creative writing class, we had to write about corn. Be it silly or deeply thought-provoking, our poem had to be completed within ten minutes. The ten minutes began and our teacher left us with the prompt "Corn Is Complicated." I kind of liked what I came up with but compared to some of the others' in the class felt it was a bit lackluster so I never shared it-- until now!
(I can never think of creative titles so this one, like the lot of my poems, is untitled.)


Untitled

She grows each year with golden skin,

Her silky hairs blowing in the wind.

In winter, she pales; though, her taste becomes sweeter

Hunger is lulled to those who meet her


Within her is located a myriad of possibilities.

But she knows that she has responsibilities.

She gives her life, dies by the scythe;

Yet her story is never-ending.


In green tucked away safely 'til May

When she will rise again.



UwU

4

Threads

86

Posts

1k+

Credits

Talent Master

Eleanor

Credits
1250

Le Penseu

Post time 2018-5-14 08:29:32 | All posts
This is really well done! I love it <3
Reply 支持 反对

Use magic Report

1

Threads

10

Posts

195

Credits

Certified Pixie

Credits
195
 Author| Post time 2018-5-19 23:27:40 | All posts
eleanorpixie replied at 2018-5-14 07:29
This is really well done! I love it

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!   I didn't want to make something too corny (I'm so sorry), but then I was worried I was trying too hard to make something meaningful out of something simple (even though in hindsight I guess that was the assignment)..
UwU
Reply 支持 反对

Use magic Report

Archiver|mobile|banned|Developer Email|Account frozen|Privacy Policy|Fairyabc

GMT-4, 2024-4-20 01:51 , Processed in 0.121099 second(s), 38 queries .

Copyright © 2013-2022 Fairyabc

Powered by Discuz!
Quick reply To Top Back to list