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Post time 2018-1-30 14:45:13 | Show all posts |Read mode
Edited by ihaveausername at 2018-1-31 16:25

This one was really hard- it was originally going to be poem #2 in this series, but  I couldn't figure out how to do it and wrote Light instead. It might not be as good as the others, so constructive criticism is very welcome. Enjoy!

GardenFly above the brightened blooms
The petals float on tufts of wind
Tend plants as 'round the world you zoom
And lay your flowers where they're pinned
A peculiar skill
For it requires aid
Gardens bend to your will
But you cannot work without plans laid
Requiring water and light as well
The leaves are yours
If with help you grow their cells
Other talents act as doors,
Lay pathways to your garden dells
And from there you may tend your bluebells.

(I couldn't find a second rhyme for the ending 'ell' that made sense so I just went with that. If you can make up a better last line, tell me- I'll use it and credit you!)

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Post time 2018-1-30 21:09:25 | Show all posts
Garden Fairies are lit and so is this wonderful poem.
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Post time 2018-1-31 00:00:39 | Show all posts
I myself, am a Garden talent, and this poem is absolutely spectacular!
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